All Comments on 'The Analyst'

This story has a decent foundation. The girl is 17 though?

She was betrothed to be married at 17. Story starts 10 years later

I like the writing. Seems a fair start. Please continue

good story continue

Tight. Cohesive. I like it.

For a similar treatment of the subject try The Reluctant Psychic, by only_more_so. Unfortunately, he has not submitted a story in over a decade.

You mixed together a really unusual but well constructed story. The concepts are still foggy but the best way I can describe it is that you made an incredibly crooked line that managed to go straight to the heart of this story.

Very different and very creative. I hope you add to this.