by tmark0099
look for Mike to say fk it and move him and Joe away lol. before they drive him nuts?
I hope you write more. I want to know who the mystery woman is and what happens between Mike Sarah and Julie and how aunt Debbie and his mom play out
You are a devious master of the craft. Weaving in multiple threads, all lusty and intriguing. The mystery woman has me on edge. Please do not leave us hanging. Keep em cumming
This is the story that I started to follow you for. I hope you continue it. The character are compelling and interesting. I would line to see Mike start to take active control of his life in some small ways.
If the two fathers are brothers then they are blood related.
Please - PLEASE continue!!.....This is one of the hottest stories I have ever read.
if you don't continue, im gonna sue you for writing a good story and never finishing it like the way it should.
last woman has to be deborah and she knows everything. her and vanessa both pregnant at the same time would be such a story
Thank you.
It's a very interesting story.
The characters are very vividly revealed.
There are still questions:
Is Julie in love with Michael or not?
What's going on in Sarah's head?
Is it Vanessa in Michael's bed?
When will Aunt Deborah be in Michael's bed?
Who will Michael choose?
Or will it be a harem?
Did Michael get custody of Joe so quickly because he's the biological father?
And about the inaccuracies:
The first part says that Michael left home when he was 18 and came back six years later. He's 24. Why do you write that he's 26?
Michael was laying out to Julie about Robin's birthday, and describing that he fucked Robin in the cunt and Phil in the anus. In part 3, it says the opposite.
Joe's four years old?
It’s a very complex story and there are so many unanswered questions Mike needs to resolve, so please let us know the ending of this saga.
Really enjoyed the story,will there be any more,
susangibson57@hotmail.co.uk
Maybe this would have been a good story if a few things had occurred.
If it were written in order
If it made any sense
If it were finished (maybe)
Don't stop now. This is just getting near the point of all the to & fro between the women. I think he should knock up Mom and the 2 cousins. Then live happily ever after.
Mike is an indecisive young male. Continue the story with him getting all the women pregnant.
I would love to see him get both his cousins pregnant and his mom and his aunt!!!!!!