All Comments on 'The Andersons: Home from Work'

I don't know what a lapine is, maybe a rabbit?? Is this a family o rabbits?? Must be...rabbits have paws, people don't! I guess you thought this was cute, but I quit reading halfway through.

Well written but usage of paws verses hands made me think this was a cartoon.

The protagonists had both or either at times. I don't think paws have opposable thumbs which makes many things in the store awkward to imagine.

Also, as a commissioned writer, I'd suggest spell checking one last time.

Beyond those, it was a pleasant diversion.

Unless it is a fantasy story, stick with human parts. It killed an otherwise decent idea.

I can't wait to see where you go with this!

Yes, rabbits. I had to Google it myself. Weird story.

Very confusing...better In non human the paws and lupine were distracting here

You guys it is a furry story, that is why it has furries in it. I am a furry author. And yeah I meant to settle on paws- this is actually an old story previously posted on SoFurry. I should have done another look over for inconsistencies. At any rate sequels to come.

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