All Comments on 'The April Fool'

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StruckwrongStruckwrong9 months ago

Short and sweet.

shadrachtshadracht8 months ago

Lack of resolution makes this unsatisfying. We hear more about their conversation and self justification of the wife than we do any result of the exposure. And who was the shooter? 3

silverthorne16silverthorne16about 1 month ago

So the Sheriff's office knew what was going on via the video feed, but the Sheriff appeared to not know when he intercepted them? And no further explanation about the shooter?

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

Done very nicely. Nothing else need be said. Five stars

AnonymousAnonymous18 days ago

Who shot JR? Oops, I mean JB / Jimmy Bob?

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Yes, I'm old enough to have enjoyed the '60s...and 70s, and everything from then until now. My experiences and points of view are likely quite different, so be open minded when you read my stuff, as I do with yours. Current works: Chapters 1 & 2 of Comeuppance are awaiting a...