All Comments on 'The Argive Ch. 036-040'

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DwaynedomentntDwaynedomentntover 1 year ago

Holy cow, quite the abrupt ending there. Hope to see how Praxis fares soon.

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 1 year ago

This is a terrible ending, although it was obvious him getting stabbed in the back was the obvious answer after his mom's death. It also doesn't fit with normally how hyper-aware Praxis is to his surroundings. 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I really hope that Damian, Xanthos, and others get to experience some prolonged pain and remorse for their actions and treatment towards Praxis.

ju8streadingju8streadingover 1 year ago

he should have listened to mom

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The ending reminds me of Damocles the sword of vengeance from Ryse son of Rome for some reason,though Damocles was a Roman. It would be interesting tho if the gods helped him.

WargamerWargamerover 1 year ago

The end of the story, that was quick!!!!

Nah!!!

He’ll survive and vengeance will be his.

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 1 year ago

" Praxis looked back on his home city.

He had no idea that the next time he would see it, everything would be different."

Far from the end of this tale .

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Praxis isn't very smart.

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