All Comments on 'The Argive Ch. 051-055'

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Comentarista82Comentarista82over 1 year ago

I suppose it makes sense to place a cliffhanger here, although it's still not my favorite device to witness. It makes sense someone spotted them since Demetrios warned them multiple times too.

I rated 5 for how you realistically portrayed Praxis' need to heal and Lysandra's moodiness. It's about as good as an intervening chapter can get.

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