All Comments on 'The Argive Ch. 055-060'

Admit personally could Never write the Quality stories you have. Find myself skipping over a 'site-appropriate' scene because the story is so interesting. Constructively feel seriously detracts from story continuity when author forgets their own character setup. Chapter 54: Parental Ties "I've been called a foreigner most of my life by my own people," replied Praxis. "I assumed my father's heritage had something to do with it."

"Yes, for you are more Messenian than you are an Argive. At least, you seem to favor your father's side more than your mother's."

Demetrios never points out to the Elders Praxis mother had died and he was now free to return to his Messenian father. He was Not an Argive by 'blood' but a Messenian.

LOVE how he killed Ares' priests and saved Dirce with her children. I loved it even more that you're writing Lysandra to be a warrior, since that seems such a logical extension of her passion and love for Praxis. I really can't wait to see her shine more and to become a respected warrior at Praxis' side in her own right. Very nice way to twist this story to provide something new! 5.

To answer anonymous below . Yes but for Praxis to embrace his Messenian heritage will be a very hard task . He was born and raised in Argive . So it was always weird when they called him foreigner . He will have to meet his father before he can even consider his real heritage if even then . But this town doesn't accept anything that isn't Spartan . Messinians have no alliances anyway . So it wouldn't help .

A very impressive story. I'm loving it.

Dang great as always, but I want!