by CJMcCormick
Going to keep this one short. Except for Medios, no one misses Orcus and no one weeps his appropriate demise, so great poetic justice you imposed on him. You relayed the same distress and sadness to us as readers that Praxis and Lysandra felt over having to leave Demetrios and Rastus. How long will they have to run before they can find some peace? Now though Lysandra's threatened by these thieves and this cliffhanger now really sucks--especially after Praxis and Lysandra JUST escaping with their lives (doubly so).
Really cute interlude you presented with Cora and Agemon. She really seems a great way to smooth over his rough edges. :)
I won't down the story for a cliffhanger I believe to be totally out of place, as I already rated it 5. However, I was seriously having 2nd thoughts.