All Comments on 'The Argive Ch. 071-075'

Eh...don't particularly care for this part of the arc and cliffhanger. Obviously it was a no-win scenario where the best they could hope for was some kind of stalemale...but they're captured. There's hope, but not much--and between slim and none, it feels like slim left the building.

GR8 chapter . Well done . Thanks

My 2 cents

Excellent story! Keep it going. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for your imagination and efforts.

I don't really get why they were goofing around for two nights after Lysandra was captured, while she was being passed around... there's usually not much left to be rescued after two nights of being gang raped by 30 men. Even though it appears the author had them unrealistically ignoring her, that should have been the expectation they would be imagining and so they would be acting with a sense of urgency. They should have been too breathless from sprinting to bicker.