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Comentarista82over 1 year agoA VERY fitting time to leave this as a cliffhanger!
This spear phalanx shows great promise, and you tease us with Phaedra's and Praxis' possible sibling links. I begin to suspect somehow Nicomedes loved Doris and sired a few children by her, something that she never shared with anyone?
I appreciate how you've balanced Lysandra and Zenais with Praxis. I hope you continue it, as there doesn't need to be tons of steamy detail to keep readers interested; in fact, how you made Zenais react to just having him shocked me. 5
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CJMcCormick@CJMcCormickLong time, no talk! I'm still around and still writing. I had someone reach out to see if I was still alive, and I very much am. I no longer write under the CJ McCormick pen name though, and I have migrated to using three new pens. I won't be posting to Literotica any lo...
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