All Comments on 'The Argive Ch. 136-141'

Yes! Absolutely yes, for a sequel to this wonderful tale of ethical service and courage in the face of near overwhelming adversity. Thank you for putting your stories in writing for us to witness what is in your minds eye. Be well.../A

Another happy ending gained by much turmoil and hard work with those they loved for inspiration. Enjoyed the tale. Thanks for sharing your imagination and hard work with us. I look forward to your next venture.

More please, there are 2 areas that he gas to govern. How does he do it??

5 stars since I can't do more

Yes, I would like to read more.

It has been an amazing journey here with Praxis. It is a great ending, but I am sad it is over. I would have loved to see more with the gods. Thank you for sharing.

Excellent. Please keep your writing based on history. I have also read you sci fi, sorry its just not up to standard that you write. Ones with a historical content work well.

Please continue. I’d love to hear about Praxis’ children and especially if anything came of his coupling with Athena / Lysandra before the battle.

Such a fantastic tale, that deserves a sequel. Their future is just beginning. 5 stars doesn't do it justice!!

I think a sequel to this story would be a great idea. I hope you consider it!

Thank you very much for the pleasure of reading this excellent story. I loved the story and the many characters you introduced to tell that story. Whether you continue the story or end it now is your choice as the author and you are one of the best currently on Literotica.

loved it brought it to a beautiful finish. thanks

Definitely hope to hear if he and Athena have any offspring and if she falls in love like most God's do with their some mortals and see any other kids what happens with his sister etc

would love to read more about praxis

Your story appears to be loosely based on the battle of Hysiae in 669 bce. The Argive army defeated the Spartan army using a revolutionary battle tactic… the phalanx. Although I believe King Praxis was a much better ruler than the Tyrant Pheidon of Argos. You’ve created a very entertaining and engaging story. Of course I’d love a sequel.

I throughly enjoyed every chapter. You did a masterful job of spinning an epic tale. Thank you and keep them coming.

Beautiful story full of twist and turns and not just sex. Fairytale ending just adds cherry on the top. Love to see a sequel of Praxis with a story with Goddess Athena.

Of course a Praxis and friends sequel would be outstanding . This story was as GR8 as any of your others . This may be my favorite . But it is hard to say . You have a way of writing that draws me in to be able to vision the story as it goes along . Such a talent for that . Well done . Thank you .

Was a great story welltold.... That being said, I was disappointed that Phaedra and Zantho's younger brother were not at least eyeballing each other..... Who is leading and/or rebuilding Messene? Thanks, for another good read!

The story was great. It was very well written and kept me waiting on the next chapter. I look forward to a sequel. I hope it comes sooon.

It's stories like this that keep me coming back to this site.

Cheers.

Great story, I would love a sequel.

Another brilliant story that combined a proper story with sex in the appropriate places rather than loads of sex and I'm a plot around it like the old musicals build plots around songs. One of the great things about this story was that our hero was not the person to come up with the idea of the spear phalanx and he never tried to take credit for its success

More please!!

Amazing tale - well spun.

What ever happened to the wife and family of Xanthos? They just fell of the face of the earth.