by darquesied
ooh very nice. Totally had me with the branding thing. I liked how it was explained at the end.
More please, sir?
Maybe 'consensuality'? Maybe 'an intelligent, sensitive Dom' instead of a misogynist? Maybe a bit of humility...
This is typical 'fantasy BDSM' by the numbers. It's well written, but there is nothing real, imaginative or insightful here.
I really liked your story. It was well written and you had me on the edge for most of the story. The end was very good. I like the fact that he was very sensitive to his clients, and I could see myself using his services by the time it was all over. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Please don't stop! I'm so looking forward to #4. Edgy, sexy, suspence, this one has it all. You have made a fan.
Your story is publishable (IMO), which is one reason I rated it so highly.
The content is addictive and the character developement is excellent.
However, I don't get how a seemingly gentle man, who seems to like woman, can justify beating them with whips....even if they ask for it.
I found this to be one of the most fabulous stories i have ever read, very intense and sensitive at the same time. wish i was one of Sam's girls..........keep it up!
This story was forwarded to me by a friend. I am glad I took the time to read each one. The feelings I felt during each story was so intense. I didn't realize the things I wanted in life till I read them. Thank you for opening me up to new and exciting things. I hope to see more stories in the future.
I love the stories, but the brand trick totally did not work on my husband lol