by Antonio_y_Cleopatra
Great story. Unbelievable - or maybe not - but a good sexy read.
...right? One has to believe that to accept the possibility of these events. And apparently it doesn't hurt to be a voyeur, either. No matter...this is fiction, and reality can take a back seat. The sex is smoking enough to make you thoroughly enjoy the fantasy! :)
Wonderfully descriptive with a hot flow that creates anticipation and lust, and feelings between characters.
My own stories have a new standard to live up to.
The action is raw and beautiful, with sensuality and passion.
But what really sets your stories apart is an underlying love and respect, instead of using the other person.
No wasted words on describing irrelevant details.
Yours are the best stories on the web.
Loved it. After 60 years of marriage we are still very much into each other,
This romantic story, from start to finish, is marvelous, and is beautifully written by the author. The overall atmosphere is joyful, sweet, tender, and absolutely marvelous to read. Five stars for excellent story telling.