All Comments on 'The Art Project'

I'm looking forward to more of this story, please.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

I would love to see more of convent adventures. (5)

Thank you for the positive feedback. This is the 1st story I've published here. I also have it published on a few other websites. Due to all the "asking for more" feedback on the different sites, I AM planning to go ahead with a part 2. But rather having extended my story a little more when I wrote it, I am deciding to put more into what would be a continuation of the story, with attention to how I think the original could have been better. Perhaps giving more detail to how the nuns were dressed and looked each time they appear in the story. Although I would say I was trying to leave more up to the reader's imagination in the original, rather than be too descriptive. I can't say I'll put out Part 2 "tomorrow", but the wheels in my perverted mind are turning, & I have been starting to think about introducing a few believable perverted elements into the next part, based on perceived observations of the actual nuns I'm writing about. So stay tuned....

Well written and very erotic.

Extremely well written and the story developed naturally without any tedious backstory. The sexual aspect, for me, was tying the young man into a helpless exposed position and then as if it was a customary and ordinary thing masturbating him to completion. Very sexy.

Dear Readers, Thanks for all your positive encouragement of writing. I have added part 2 (& I think a part 3) to this website, and have recently submitted a story i just finished, Breast Obsession. I am currently working on a new erotica story, the concept of which just popped into my head a few days ago. And I am very excited to have begun working on it. So stay tuned...