All Comments on 'The Assassin of Elania Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
story

I can't believe she is an assassin, she's more like a weak kneed little girl. the story is supposed to be of a bad ass, yet she crumbled so quick it's comical.

CUSpacecowboyCUSpacecowboyabout 10 years ago

I like your story, but watch where you take the story because even though she's a assassin instead of a princess its really similar to another story called conquered: spoils of war

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
LMAO

This girl is no assassin. Would make more sense if she pretended to be weak and submissive as a ploy to gain the upperhand. That bit where she had her knife but was easily overpowered by the king seemed rather ludicrous coming from a woman who is supposedly a threat to the king's nation.

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