by cmajor87
This girl is no assassin. Would make more sense if she pretended to be weak and submissive as a ploy to gain the upperhand. That bit where she had her knife but was easily overpowered by the king seemed rather ludicrous coming from a woman who is supposedly a threat to the king's nation.
I like your story, but watch where you take the story because even though she's a assassin instead of a princess its really similar to another story called conquered: spoils of war
I can't believe she is an assassin, she's more like a weak kneed little girl. the story is supposed to be of a bad ass, yet she crumbled so quick it's comical.