All Comments on 'The Assistant'

for a chapter 2

Can wait for chapter 2

Please continue with Chapter 2

Would love to read chapter 2 and see more develope between between Vanessa and her young lover assistant Astacio.....

I have been reading Literotica, extensively, for some time and have never found a story that "I" wanted to comment on. I enjoyed the story very much and feel that L would enjoy reading further episodes on this, as a series.My imagination allows me to enjoy a good tale more than a visual representation. Please, don't disappoint me by not carrying this on.

Pat

Having read for the last thirty years, I can distinguish between a good and a bad story. You have it. Try your hand in fiction. I do not know, probably you are an established writer, but, if you are not, you should try.

With best wishes,

sabyasachi_nath@yahoo.com

A rare treat!

Thx!