All Comments on 'The Audition Ch. 02'

I love your stories, including this one, but you do need to answer the question of why doesn't he just lie to the lawyer and say he had the sex with the family? Must he haved a lie detector test first?

He lied, should have told the truth

While the title was poorly chosen the premise of the story is very good..albeit a bit contrived. I can predict that the big surprise of the inheritance is for the 3 women to publicly admit to being "whores" and "adulterers" in order to collect on the inheritance. Would these three women do whatever it takes to get the money? Somehow I suspect that the lawyer will play a major role in the will amendment. Oh and I suspect that videography and photography will play a large part in the following chapters.

Me wonders what devious windows the curtains will reveal in the next 2.

I cannot get the image of Cinderella, her step mother and her two ugly step sisters from my mind. That's the way I'm picturing these women and it's not an erotic image at all.