by FurLove
Ignore the WTF comment by the other user. You have to remember some people like certain stories and others don't. This is a great story! There are a few places you have some misspelled words, but other than that, the story is a very good one.
Personally, I'm not into the fur (due to how the animals are slaughtered), but everything else makes for a wonderful story.
Story was a bit slow at points, but the idea behind it and the writing was excellent. I did not give you a five because it was a bit slow at times. But I will say that I learned more about furs in the last five minutes then the last twenty five years of life. I second that opinion, ignore the WTF, if all your stories are like this you have a great writing future. Keep up the good work.
Story was a bit slow at points, but the idea behind it and the writing was excellent. I did not give you a five because it was a bit slow at times. But I will say that I learned more about furs in the last five minutes then the last twenty five years of life. I second that opinion, ignore the WTF, if all your stories are like this you have a great writing future. Keep up the good work.
Excellent erotica, well written. Your stories are different, and I must say that I learn more about furs with each one. Keep up the great writing.
I'm not sure why it's in Loving Wives. His wife was dead before anything happened and while he did mention that she was going to be his wife, he was never married to her during the story. I would put it in either Erotic Couplings or Fetish (aside from the breast milk, I assume there must be a fur fetish somewhere!)
Excellent story!! Loved learning about all the furs, can't wait to wrapup in one with a lucky young lady. Looking forward to more stories. Thank you.
Yes, this was a very erotic and hot story but it should have been placed in the Fetish Category. A well written story and a nice theme, but it leaves a lot to be desired. Why would a woman just out of Grad School want to get married, have a child and move to the US? The writer did an injustice by using the Aupair as a means to get this done. Also, Annie was used by the Aupair to meet her goals which was an injustice to all. At the first sigh that the Aupair was lactating for Annie, he should have dismissed her them. Now Rob is in LUST with the Aupair and Annie will be the one to suffer. To make matters worse, the writer wrote the story where the Aupair is bring another child into this world and that child will also suffer.
I loved the tale, don't heed the grumblers, even rattlesnake (with the stuttering keyboard :-) gave 75%, for it being slow :-)
Keep writing please , although I also like the furry animals alive, inside the furs, I acknowledge the sensuality of the furs.
Thanks
John
it started out fine, but then you switched from 1st to 3rd person and it proceeded to suck
I've been a lactation fancier for many years, but I had no idea there was a fur fetishist tucked back there in the id somewhere ... until now!
You spin a good yarn!