All Comments on 'The Awakening'

Very good writing. I’d like a little more fun reading getting him into sub space. Like worshipping parts of your body, maybe receiving your fluids. Still a story so we’ll written, I finished it without playing with myself. Simply a good read!

I am getting hungry for my next caning, and I got so hard just reading it. I was afraid to touch myself....

Lovely and relatable. I smiled at the name of your male main character. It’s the same as mine (although I’ve never used his name in my poems) and gave me especially clear visuals as I was reading. I usually stay on the erotic poetry page, but following you brought me here and I’m glad it did. Well done. 💜

great story, thank you.

Believable story, well written, erotic...

Ironic that this woman purports o love her husband and the only way she can show it is to beat him until his skin is broken and damaged. What nonsense.