All Comments on 'The Awakening Ch. 03'

Sadie, you've done yourself proud. The flow of your story is well paced, interesting, and holds the reader's attention. It is evident this is a personal experience, which makes it all the more exciting. Gramatical errors were few, which on this site is rare. That this should happen to you later in life is more than hot. Some will pine for more a more graphic sex depiction, but true-to-life experiences do not always overlap fantasy. I look forward to your next submission for I know that you did fuck the boys.

Gayle

your self esteam is only based on sex and how many men fuck you? you blame your husband to be the only at fault and go behind his back and fuck others not even protected? how do you know what kind of scheming bastards they are? aids never heard of it? why don't you just get a divorce so you can be with sam and his marvelous friends and fuck yourself to death, I guess then you really have a huge ego after that.