All Comments on 'The Awakening Ch. 21-30'

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WillowRequiem about 9 years ago

Loved it!

You are getting better, I can tell. And I love how Amra and Caly are being so honest with eachother, tho I am waiting for more passion and lust. I was a bit scared of Pronab getting too close to Caly, and then when he kissed her my heart stopped. Amra was so angry! He barely contained himself! I love it! He is so powerful and I want to see him use his power more!

txcracker about 9 years ago

Great Series !

I have read series straight through and gave each section a 5 Star rating . As far as I am concerned it is a wonderful tale . I look forward with bated breath for the next installment .

Thanks you for your effort and a GREAT read

tx cracker

Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

Your first language is not English is it.

Anonymousover 8 years ago

Awesome

Don't stop. I love your stories.

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