All Comments on 'The Awakening Pt. 06'

I loved this, I'm wondering if this will be continued

Hoping to read about her further journey

So what happened from here?

Whoop whoop Slut Jenni 👍

Well, we need to know what happened during the training and aftewards. Did she spend the entire 5 years with him? Did he pierce her in many places? Did she stay after the five years? Was she shared by other men and women during her training and afterwards? I liked that he gave her a real set of choices and gave her some time to make the decision. It would be great if the story continued with a few alternate endings. She could stay. She could leave. Please make the chapters longer. It took six chapters just to go a couple of hours when one chapter would have been better.

More yet please.