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Anonymousalmost 6 years agoChapter 2??
Been waiting for a chapter 2 since ages...hoping a fan will be obliged..
wrighterover 10 years agoawesum cumsum
the title wasnt that great, but dear u as usual are awesome. i liked this built up. great going dear. looking out for more
Anonymousover 10 years agoSuch a good girl
Now give us more, neha ... please continue and tell us how your powers developed!
Anonymousover 10 years agoThe title isnt spelled right and a lot of the story switched between tenses (past and present). My advice is to get an editor or proofread it more than you have.
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