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Click here"I did not mean that," Orion grimaced. "I simply meant that I have time on my side," he said lightly. "All of my potential competitors are mortal, you see. And I am known for my patience."
And with that ominous declaration, he disappeared into the kitchen with his half empty plate in his hand.
Author's note: Hi there! Fear not, I have not forgotten that this is an Erotica. There's some good stuff coming up in the next chapter (which will be the last one) so please bear with me. ~Ash
- COMMENTS
Ava_fernover 2 years agoAuthorDear Amflyer1,
So...the last chapter is nearly finished-- just not quite happy with the ending yet. (Belatedly realized that it's nearly impossible to squeeze everything in 8 chapters, and currently trying to figure out how to wrap up a particular subplot without having to resort to writing a sequel) In any case, it should be up within 10 days or so. Thanks for reading! ~Ash
Anonymousover 2 years agoYou nailed Orion on this one. Agatha on the other hand could not be more confusing. If she sees herself as a healer, saving Rubenstraad from the famine should be important to her. Who other than Orion cared for her, looked after her, protected her, rescued her?
I don’t understand her reluctance to agree and stay with the elves. It has no sense that Fin allowed her to stay with Orion instead of taking her to Ost-in-Edhil.
You painted a world where human women are not respected unless they are dragon riders. Where does she want to go?
Not a single declaration of love, not a single apology.
Please, don’t rush the next chapter.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoThey have hundreds of years to work this out right? I get why he did it.
Thanks for another great chapter although please don't refer from Orion's personality too much, he is a commanding force and this shouldn't be ignored. Also, can I suggest you write more about their camp relationship, you seemed to have skipped a big part of how their connection formed!
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoYou are so good to us. Inasmuch as it pains me to wait for the next and last chapter, please do take your time. This chapter felt a bit rushed and could have benefitted from more plot, character and dialogue development. But I'm no fool - 5/5 all the way for such a captivating piece.
