All Comments on 'The B.F.G.'

You are a great story teller. My first comment after reading about 250 stories here. Fabulous characters and extremely well written. Thank you

I love all the characters you created. Thanks.

I couldn't get through the first page with any sense of comprehension so I just threw in the towel. I was especially pleased with my decision when I found out that this garbage continued on for 10 pages. 10 PAGES!!!! Are you fucking kidding! 1*

I for one enjoyed it very much. I’m not surprised that another reader wasn’t able to keep up, but I felt it was worth the effort. I’m glad I stayed!

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

That's what your story made me.

Lovely!

Erotica? Perhaps. Romance? ABOSOLUTELY!

Thank you!

I’m breathless and wordless. I am a writer and some people say a good one, I hope I’m as good as you someday. I will be studying your work for the next few weeks and doing what I can to appropriately include some of your skill into my next series of novels. Indescribably delicious.

It was a good story! It took me most of it to get the characters straight, and I had trouble knowing who was talking. I like your style! You’re one of the best I’ve read so far.... and I read a lot. Thank you!

I agree with many other commenters that it was challenging figuring out past from present and who each speaker was. Other than that, I just discovered you because of your recent Writer's Win. I am eagerly working my way through your stories.

Just been reading your stories again... This one is such a roller coaster... Normally I'm not a huge fan of multiple perspectives, but the way you make it so effortlessly work in this story is pretty damn awe inspiring.

One of your absolute best, if not the best... I'd love to see a follow up of the next generation, with little Tony and his own little group that's starting to form.

Wow. Utterly fantastic story. You are far too talented to be doing this as a hobby! This story is as good as any I’ve read in my over 50 years of reading regardless of the genre.

Just exceptional. I will be reading all your other works.

Interesting. There are enough positive reviews here to suggest this story hits the sweet spot for many. For that audience my possible comment is edit it two more times. Just enough structure and grammar problems to make that worthwhile. For me, this reads like a 16 year old trying awfully hard to write a soppy, sexy story. 1 * and I'll pass on any others. Matter of taste, I guess.

Great story, kept me turning the pages, so to speak. Though BFG was only a part of the larger story. I wonder if the few commenters who had issues know they don’t have to read a story, vote or comment…?

A wonderful collection of broken sticks seamlessly built into a palace.

Too many characters. I got lost.

Confusing story and stupidly wtitten

My truthful word. What a bunch of wankers complaining. In fact, this is a beautifully structured story that had tears running down my cheeks. Who let those fuckwits in anyway? Thanks for this gift.

second time round.great story