All Comments on 'The Babes on Brentwood'

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Amazing story, love the dialog/premise, ending is right up there with the 6th sense

5/5, would get mind blown again

your stories are a pleasure! to read, very well written and always a little twist or two in them.

Looking forward to the next chapter in August

I know this is probably an out of bounds comment for this site. I have participated in quite a few threesomes. Lots contact with the ladies. Just so you know where I'm coming from.

So how do you get the excitement back in marriage?

Commitment.

Any chance for that final installment?

I enjoyed both stories., Please submit chapter three!

Hey guys and dolls, for those that loved this storyline, I have turned it into a full length novel that's about 50K words. I've reworked the two chapters posted on here (The Bitches in the Basement and The Babes on Brentwood) and then added three more chapters, including the hot and dirty confrontation between all the main players. It's now on Amazon and Smashwords for a couple of bucks under the novel title "The Bitches in the Basement" (just google it or visit my site ashleighlake.com for more details). To give you an idea - I've posted about 16K words online and the novel is over 50K words - good value and I promise it to be a verrry satisfying conclusion to the story. :) Thanks so much for the support! XO

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That was good. I wonder why they are blackmailing them?