All Comments on 'The Babymaker Ch. 01'

I wonder if someone followed the detectives to their interview. I'm just guessing is all. I must say WW I love these more meatier stories. Glad to see a new story drop from you. Thanks, hope all is well!

Is this the end for Cindy?

The next chapter of this story has been submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.

As usual, Level 3 Patrons will get the cliffhanger answer this evening. Level 2 and 3 patrons are getting updates and additional content, such as picture representations of Bowser, Carole, and Cindy Ross. Of course, any support is greatly appreciated. My Patreon is at https://www.patreon.com/IronCrowbar.

Alrighty, here we go again........

Mrs Crowbar could answer most of their questions ?

Cindy Ross has become a liability, no longer an asset. Time that she is let go.

The reason I can't give this a 4 or 5 is because of the Bettina nonsense and the other useless material. Now I can just skip those paragraphs and not miss any of the story at all. I sure hope you go back to the good writing you did early on. I have read every story you wrote.

Here we go again ill b watching for the next installment to drop asap. Cant wait thanks for an outstanding story as usual

Another great story with some very interesting twists. Apparently your police commander will have some explaining to do or else you plan on getting rid of her, but I doubt that is your intent.

cindy just fucked up

Cindy Ross has revealed her true loyalties and it is not to her fellow police officers. She must be fired. Sadly she did not inherit her father's demeanor and will suck at running that organization.

Ignore the media reports at your peril. In fact, I'm going to make damn sure that important clues ARE embedded in the morning reports.

But those morning reports are important, anyway. First, they convey important information that affects the story. And second and most importantly, they show the bias, dishonesty, and deep corruption of the Mainstream Media. And showing the perfidy of the Media is the main reason I keep writing and publishing these stories, to show that corruption and dishonesty that is destroying America and getting our military service members and Police Officers murdered. I will NEVER stop exposing the corruption of the American Mainstream Media.

And if you don't like that, Mr. hiding-behind-the-cloak-of-Anonymous, there are many other stories on this site for you to read, and I won't care a bit if you don't read mine. See ya, and I wouldn't wanna be ya.

Clearly Crowbar your frequent media exposure and its perfidy is key in your overall message . And is part of how the Crowbar gets his clues . A very important part of these stories .

About Cindy ? Just WOW !

Woah! Thatz clearly obstruction of s criminal Investigation...

WTF was Cindy thinking...

She needs to kept her emotions in check seriously.

What does Grizz know about Cindy and what does Cindy think she's playing at? Definitely not a weak mind, that's for sure.

The hotel scene with Ariel, Wanda, Carl and Laura’s secretary Laurie now makes sense. Initial preview of Carl’s side enterprise.

*****Thanks for the read.