All Comments on 'The Babysitter'

Very sexy fantasy of so many of us here. And very well written! Thanks! ;)

Vascectomy ruined this story. I didn't even read any more of it after that. A "fixing" or castration does not belong in "fantasy" stories such as Literotica.

Great story. Well written. I wish the sex had lasted longer. I probably would have shot my load if the fucking had lasted longer. Oh well, I'll read it again.

This brings back memories of one of my daughter's friends who stayed overnight at our home after I was divorced. Everyone was asleep except me and I was sitting watching TV when she came in with a long tshirt on and asked me to rub her back. She got down on the floor and when I had finished doing her back she rolled over and my hand was now on her breast and she asked me to do it to her. I said no and she said that my daughter had told her that I had a vascectomy when I was younger and could never get anyone pregnant and she said she wanted to feel the real thing and wanted to feel someone cum inside of her. It was so wonderful but I fealt so guilty. But it was not the last time for me and her and we continued until I got remarried. Turned out to be some of the best sex I had ever had past or present. Same as your story it was great.

You would not happen to be in the need of a new baby sitter would you? :) kidding.

You can bet when I get my Sunday paper .FIRST THING, I am going straight to the help wanted section labeled baby sitting to look for a career change. I think I want to be a baby sitter when I grow up.... That was HOT. I almost forgot I was reading a story.....

Rabbit

Amazingly played out. It's a classic fantasy and you breathed some life into it. I'm not even sure if there should be a sequel or not. It's just that good.

This reminds me of when I was the babysitter. Very erotic but I wish there had been more sex and that he wasn't snipped. It would have been great to see her get pregnant and then have his wife find out.

I had my hand fingering myself as the story brought back memories of a couple I babysat for years ago

Long time fan again, thanks for posting this one-one of my favorites. Now, how about that hot jogging one...and the young woman visiting her friend's odd parents...and :D

Will Lit let you post your opus, Doing it All Over? I guess it could be Senior year...

Wow...I used to have that fantasy all the time during my years of baby-sitting, but it's never been articulated so well. I'm so wet and worked up right now - gotta go lock the door!

Excellent tale of a familiar fantasy.

Wonderful job of building the tension and making the seduction believable and erotic. My only quibble would be that if he was going to show her how sex with a mature man was better, then he should have done more to prolong it for her, or at least do some follow-up foreplay (does that make it after-play?). That kind of chance is once in a lifetime, he definitely should have rocked her world (even more than he did).

Did she ever find out that your cum did not have those little tadpoles in it? Then what did she do? Maybe she wants to set up permanent housekeeping with you and of course without babies?

This is a piece of masterful writing.

The buildup, from little babysitter to nubile teenager, and from sexy thoughts to the actual sex, is perfect.

And the language is excellent - word choice, grammar, spelling, punctuation all skillful - unlike many submissions to Literotica and elsewhere.

Thankyou, Al_Steiner.

when he came home Courtney should have told him the condom wrapper.was not hers.

This was great please write a sequel

Hot story, while well written. Believable, good pacing, all the angst was well done and the loss of control, with its aftermath was nicely done. Write some more, Al

Jack

I loved the whole story. The passion they both gave at the last gave me a grteat erection!!!

Great story, would like you to continue with part 2