All Comments on 'The Babysitter'

by Purple_Rose90

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Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

So he says"Jake is in the living room"

Takes 'her' in there and introduces 'her' to 'Andrew'?

Where the h*ll did 'Jake' go??

Purple_Rose90 almost 4 years agoAuthor

Bye bye Jake

Sorry for the error. Ignore Jake (that was my first choice for the name), it should say Andrew.

Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

I think I'm in love!

You certainly get my motor running! Great stories, all of them. Now how about stretching yourself and giving more than one page at a time? It'll be difficult to expand into emotions but I'd like to see what you come up with. You have a very interesting voice.

AngstIgnored almost 3 years ago

"How long can Mr. Anderson control his desires?" About five minutes, give or take?

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