All Comments on 'The Babysitter & the Toilet Seat'

Love it....Karen has some serious Kink going on

A little too much information on the bodily functions front which almost put me off. However, ignoring that, it was quite well-written, generally amusing, with a few laugh out loud moments. I think the slobbish Wayne would make quite a good comic character in stories of his own (imagine, being expected to work for a living. Horrendous!).

I don't know if you're old enough to remember a British comedian called Cyril Fletcher. Part of his act involved his 'Odd Odes', a series of long, comic poems in rhyming couplets. One such was The Saga of Sonia Snell who went into a public toilet and got stuck on a freshly-painted toilet seat. If you're interested, it's probably somewhere on line.

A little too much information on the bodily functions front which almost put me off. However, ignoring that, it was quite well-written, generally amusing, with a few laugh out loud moments. I think the slobbish Wayne would make quite a good comic character in stories of his own (imagine, being expected to work for a living. Horrendous!).

I don't know if you're old enough to remember a British comedian called Cyril Fletcher. Part of his act involved his 'Odd Odes', a series of long, comic poems in rhyming couplets. One such was The Saga of Sonia Snell who went into a public toilet and got stuck on a freshly-painted toilet seat. If you're interested, it's probably somewhere on line.

FETISH

This story was initially submitted as a Fetish story, therefore the story was much more graphic than I would have made a story in the Lesbian Sex category. The site administrators changed the classification to Lesbian Sex before publication, had I known this was going to happen I would have toned it down a lot.

Thanks for the positive comments so far, I'll have to check out the Cyril Fletcher odes, and I'm glad you liked Karen and her layabout twin brother Wayne.

a little too much bathroom stuff for my taste....

yoooo the bathroom stuff is A+ for bathroom fetishists and though i dont like that myself i appreciate that it was well written. Love it, wish there was more of Janine and Karen but appreciate what youve written. Thank you :)

not a fan of the piss, shit, and period kinks, but a little lez action was ok, the brother was not needed in the story, you could have left him out to make a better story. I think that took away from the story

I thought it was a great read!

Menstruation is off putting to me but easily blanked out, I liked the innocence and the nurturing of the pair. It just felt real.

while Karen's fets sure not mine enjoyed 2 teen cuties having fun, chowing down, and lucky bf, Karen encouraging her to go down on him

LOVE that you gave both them lush muffins, certainly not rare back in the 80's, not believable neither bro or mom didn't zero right in to that unmistakable smell

as Karen's had cock in all her holes think she's bi, not lesbian-whichever like her attitude...

periods never stopped me and gf's...just need to put thick towel down, and no cowgirl...

Loved it enough to wish that it was my bare bum stuck to the toilet.

Emma x