All Comments on 'The Babysitter Did It Ch. 07'

You've done a good job of making Krissy flawed in ways that really make sense given her upbringing, age, and (especially) the company she keeps in her social life. Keep up the good work!

Also, I really, really hope Mrs. Adams is not her "mentor" in all this. That would pretty much ruin my investment in this story.

Thanks for the feedback - greatly appreciated.

Interesting idea twist but no, Mrs. Adams is not Krissy's mentor. I agree though it would be a bit "hokey", something Hollywood might do. The plan is to reveal Krissy's mentor in Chapter 8 which I've started but put on hold as I'm trying to first complete a self-contained story for this year's International Nude Day competition.

Love the story and your writing, looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Hi author! great writing. please continue the story please! please! please!

Such a great story. Please keep it going

PLEASE CONTINUE!

We need more!