All Comments on 'The Babysitter Scam'

Fun story, I enjoyed every moment of it. It was a clever scam she pulled and the guy deserved to be taken advantage like that.

One problem, the last paragraph you switched up to first person narrative. I figure you were describing her thoughts, but it didn't really seem that way at the same time.

Other than that, keep up the good work. 5-stars.

5 Stars. Please let him call her again.

I loved the cheating aspect 🙈

Have read your raunchy pieces from way back. This piece adds some humor to the sex, and the reader actually meets a three-dimensional heroine, which is a bit unusual for your storylines. Nice to see; Janet is actually worth getting to know. 5 stars.

Did they leave the kid at home as they drove to the ATM?

Not a series?