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Click hereShe had a right to be anxious. Nikki's ginger pussy would soon drain my nuts if no one interfered. I wouldn't have any say in the matter. And I still had an assignation with her sister on tap!!
My whole world was in tumult. I was going to sloppy this woman with my seed--or bust!! Nikki knew it, too. At the last moment she hopped up and pulled Carmella atop me. Once inside the bride I came instantly, much to the delight of the assembled crowd. Carmella seemed pleased, too. Twenty-four hours hence this woman would be mounted atop her husband in wedded bliss, fucking his six-incher and imagining him to be me. Just now she was dripping with the semen of a stranger.
I almost fainted.
I awakened to the smell and taste of pussy. Lisa was mounted over my face. Her clit rested on the tip of my nose. She was writhing without actually touching me, but her luscious cunt was millimeters from my lips. Her sister was sucking my dick or rather, someone was. I just guessed it to be Nikki since Lisa's vagina blocked my view. I couldn't imagine the bride sucking dick this well.
Put yourself in my place. The two loveliest women in the room are weaving their magic on your cock and your mouth. Do you give a shit what the bride thinks? Do you care what the rest of the women in the room think? Do you care about getting paid? Do you care if the police raid the place and throw you in jail for publicly fornicating?
No. You do not.
I soiled Nikki's throat and, subsequently, her pussy. I did the same for her sister.
At the end of the night it was evident that the three of us had a future. We were different from the others. We were professionals.
I whispered my private phone number into Lisa's ear, dressed and left.
- COMMENTS
Comentarista82over 2 years agoIt seems the jist of this story is in part to mimic the intensity of this kind of party, aside from hear about Chad, why he dances and what/when a male stripper should do. It's different that you are female writing from a male perspective. It sounded like you didn't just try to make it a "whip them into a frenzy" and leave it there; you revealed some of Chad's thinking to us, as well as his reflections. On those parts, I would say 5.
My concerns (as hackneyed as one or more may sound) would be the obvious: don't forget that if a guy gets blessed with 6", he's got more than 95% of guys. I don't doubt some male's going to have 12"+, since Peter North always brags about having 11"...but to "hang" (yes, pun intended) a story on size can get dicey. While I'm sure some guys are still immature enough to brag about their size or even "measure," a story partly hinging on it has to walk a fine line: while I'm sure some females will complain about size and some guys will claim they can "satisfy" a female on that alone, it's still going to "rub" some the wrong way to read about "imagining she's riding me" or something to that effect; same can be said for a woman taking 12.75" without a hitch. There's also the other side of the equation where ladies will say "it's how a guy uses what he has" that matters most to them--and not just his tool (literally the whole package).
So, does the story encapsulate what a bachelorette party might look like? Yes. Can females get just as riled up as guys? No doubt. Can they get just as out of hand and something like this happen? I don't see why not. Is this a very sexy piece? Definitely. There are lots of successes here, although I will point back to my latter comments as things to consider on a similar kind of story in the future. 4.
Bardot1990over 2 years agoAuthorNONCONLuv, I've written a whole summation of The Honeymoon that hasn't been published yet. It should be soon, since I submitted it weeks ago. It is Part 6. Somehow they published the Finale beforehand. You'll get a clearer understanding of Lisa and Nicole and Trevor from that one. And I should finish up The Bachelorette Party Part 2 today. It's already written, I just have to edit it for content.
Justplainjeffover 2 years agoHey, Anonymous, why don't you man up and put a name to your homophobic rants? Its haters like you that are ruining our country.
NONCONLuvover 2 years agoWow!
I read the trilogy which kept me rooted and rooting for a few of the couples to last longer than they did. Never did I ever consider that Detroit would be an interesting backstory to read, but he is. Looking forward to more of his story. Oh and yes, more of Artie and Lisa.
