by chaniseaustin
Holy crap! I'm gonna be honest. I was annoyed with Steve going for trying to get her off instead of just talking to her. Like his focus was more on owning her loins even more than her heart. I basically kinda eye-rolled at that part. All-in-all, though, I'm still attached to the story and invested in the characters. I think Ronnie seems kinda shady. There's just something about him I don't like. I still think Steve and Mikki would be a good match if he would just stop being scared. I hope the next chapter doesn't take so long. I want to see what happens next!