All Comments on 'The Back Seat'

Interesting perspective. I liked both of your posts. I'm looking forward to more!

Really enjoyed it!

Second person point-of-view is VERY difficult to do, and damn near impossible if the 'you' has an identifiable gender in a sexual story. Only if no obvious sexual 'bits or pieces' are described. Yeah, that's easy to write AND make it be exciting!

In other words. Just don't EVER write in second person, unless it is a letter to a specific person! And even then, it is presumptious in most cases!

2.7 = 3*

I'm sure hubby loved fucking your sloppy cunt when you got home