by Seahawk76
This is one of the best stories I've read on Literotica. It
avoids the excesses that most authors seem to revel in yet stimulates the senses far better. Granted that the setup is a little far fetched, it still reveals the thoughts and feelings of the characters in a way that is rational and all to human. Bravo! I hope you'll continue this series, though the story itself stands alone.
If only things like this really happened. Still fantasy is a wonderful thing and I enjoyed Laurie's adventures so much. I would love to be in her place being escorted off the field. That point in the story was really it for me. I hope you find time to write more.
Loved it.
I wonder if you are a man or a woman?
So much better than the excessive sex in so many of the stories. And it really was a story, with a start, middle and end. Look forward to reading the sequels.
I loved the anticipation her pulling her shorts off first. Very well written, i could feel her anxiety and it turned me on even more. Thats what most authors leave out, other people's reactions. And in public nudity the public's reactions are the most important. Nice story, looking forward to reading the other parts.
-Lestat
lucky girl...wish i had someone who would control me like this...its
hotter because its female/female. thanks
Forced female public nudity seems to be your fetish. A very common a tasteful fetish. This was very enjoyable and realistic.