by semiosis50
I really enjoy this story so far. Thanks for taking the time to put it out there for everyone.
Oh my goodness, I love this story so, so much. I would buy it on the kindle because every day it’s hard to wait for the next chapter. Unfortunately, my kindle is broken….
I am working through some huge life challenges, and your story flies me to a happy and interesting place. I can barely wait for tomorrow. I reread all the chapters so far.
Hey anonymous and anonymous. Thanks for commenting. It's good to hear the story is working for you. Cheers. Harp.
I wasn't sure about this story at the beginning, but the more I read the more I love it. I'm excited for the next party to release.
Please continue the story. I loved the rough stuff and definitely loved the turn it took to them trying to be heroic. But they can’t stay there. If you end the story here it’s like the Alamo and obviously they’re all gonna die. And that sucks.
The way you write these men and women who have lived in completely different worlds and never interacted with each other before is so interesting. The way Decker keeps justifying his behavior because it’s “not as bad” as it could be is very human.
Lily and Yenna are at the worst disadvantage in this setting, so it's lucky the men had a collective change of heart! I was definitely worried they wouldn't be on the same page with this, but you work it out so nicely!