All Comments on 'The Ballad of Jaimie and Vera Ch. 03'

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AwkwardMDAwkwardMDalmost 10 years agoAuthor
So you may have noticed...

...that this chapter was considerably shorter! Act 2, in 5 parts, is all just like this. A series of vignettes with Jaimie and Vera trying new things. The story and character development of Act 1is almost completely missing here, but it will return in Act 3. So if this was good, but not as good, as what you read before, don't check out completely. The ending is quite a ride!

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 1 year ago

That for sure was sensoric overload ….. two hot cute girls and then bam , this may kicks you out of your orbit ….. and quite mean from the girls …. So saying i thought the 80’s/90’s have been liberal BUT futa was not in the picture

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Just pressed submit on my latest collaboration with Omenainen! It'll be up on our shared account (link below) hopefully in the next few days. I'm really excited about this one. It's short and sweet (and sweaty) and it came together in a flash. Can't wait to get it out to y...