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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Good start, looking forward to read the rest

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Please do tell us more

Great little intro

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice tale

I like the dynamic here. Please continue!

chris65chris65about 14 years ago
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Hey,

Very good opening to a story! I can imagine more myself already. ;-)

Maybe you can go down the path of the girls wearing ever more revealing outfits, see-thru, etc...

Cheers,

Chris

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