All Comments on 'The Baptist Ch. 05'

She (Sally) continues to make spastic movement.... turned on everytime and everywhere

"Sally’s asshole was a virgin and she had never experiences an ass fucking." - chapter 5

but,

"Josh pulled his dick out of her pussy. It was now wet with her cunt juices but it still took some effort to force it into Sally asshole." - chapter 1

I do like the story over all, but inconsistencies like that really distract me from the story and makes it less.

keep writting, but work on keeping your facts straight