All Comments on 'The Bar'

Great sexy story! Keep up the great work!

God this was hot! You will love it and wish you were there doing this! Maybe even hoping to be caught!

Very hot! Made me want to try this! One little suggestion though, be sure to use spell check and have your story proofed.

Can I have this dance? :-)

Very nice little piece. It could really benefit from an editor, though...probably the only reason there's not a little H behind it.

Aside from a few editing mistakes, it was very good!

Nicely done! Keep up the good work!