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by ashesatwork
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The_Darknessalmost 19 years agoNicely done
Very nice little piece. It could really benefit from an editor, though...probably the only reason there's not a little H behind it.
Aside from a few editing mistakes, it was very good!
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoWow
Very hot! Made me want to try this! One little suggestion though, be sure to use spell check and have your story proofed.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoNothing like sex in a Bar!
God this was hot! You will love it and wish you were there doing this! Maybe even hoping to be caught!
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