by kjplotts
this one just had so much heat that it worked out right. Well done!!!
A really good story, the build up was wonderful! Unfortunately, the sex was just sex; and not much more!
More depth would be great ...
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I loved the build-up and how she worked her seduction - wish more authors took time to build up the characters like this. Hope to see more.
Your writing is ... active. Fabulous work. The story just jumped off the page.
Thank you very much!
And some issues like: "inaudible sounds". Sexy, though. Keep writing!
are people we all need to hear more about. Good writing - hot story!