The Bargain

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RetroBull
RetroBull
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"I'm cumming, Jake..." Beth sobbed. "I'm cumming so fucking HARD." She contorted, her back arching, her pussy quivering and quaking on his cock as her tenth orgasm blew her mind. Her eyes rolled back and her skin grew flushed.

And that was all Jake needed. With a bellow that had been building for an eternity, his own climax arrived. His cock jerked, going off like a volcano inside her, hosing her spasming tunnel with his hot jizz. Pleasure overcame him, his arms going weak, his head thumping in time with the blissful eruptions of his dick.

They rode their twin orgasms out for a long while, until eventually they faded, leaving both of them drained, exhausted and sore. But thoroughly satisfied.

Jake withdrew, kissing her shoulders as he did so, collapsing next to her on the bed. She lifted her head weakly and moved closer, cuddling up to him. He chuckled to himself. After everything that had happened tonight, he really hadn't expected post-sex cuddling.

For a moment they lay there in silence, until at last she lifted her head and kissed his cheek.

"I can't believe I made it to ten," she breathed. "Double-figures. Wow. I can't even do that with a toy." She smiled. "I'm glad we did this. Thanks for writing my essay."

"Thanks for letting me fuck you."

She giggled. "Oh, I think I enjoyed it at least as much as you." Then she straightened her arms, gazing down at him with a serious look on her face. "But this has to be our secret, Jake. This was a once-off. It can't become a regular thing."

"I know," he sighed. "I know. But will you at least be nicer to me?"

She laughed sweetly, leaning down to kiss him on the lips gently. "I think I can manage that."

THE END

RetroBull
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LanmandragonLanmandragon23 days ago

I don’t agree that the story was disappointing, I found it really good. I do agree that the situation is unresolved, though. Please feel encouraged to write a sequel! It is interesting reading the comments to see how many folks can’t control themselves 😉

KaraJ101KaraJ101over 2 years ago

I like it, but personally, I agree with Jake: you should have started there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This was really good, though I tend to agree with Paul that it's kind of disappointing he didn't cum a lot sooner. She did suck his dick exceedingly well and even with the cooldowns they had, it still wouldn't have been enough for a guy that hot for her to hold it without first having nerve damage. I've tried to hold off with a girl that was a complete knockout and came like Beth - it can't be done. About the 4th time she cums on your dick, you can't hold back. That massage is way too strong. Hair trigger girls are a ton of fun, but you can't let them suck your dick at all if you're going to give them double digits. Your balls won't allow it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
DISAPPOINTING

My interest nose dived somewhere about her fourth orgasm. He was already close from the blowjob, and he's still holding off? Come (cum) on! Get.real. So I just scanned it to find that he gave her 10 before cumming. Oh, really?!

Sorry, ruined the story for me.

Also, the relationship is unresolved. What did she have against him. What happened afterward? Needs more than fucking to be a great story.

This started out great, well-written, good dialog, tension. Until it got unreal. He could have ejaculated..... Well, what's the use? It was a great story -- until it wasn't.

Paul in Oklahoma

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great!

Great, great, great please write more!

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