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WillowghbyWillowghbyover 1 year ago
Amazing

For a first offering on Lit, this story is wonderful. Beyond a few grammar issues (I admit to being hypercritical) it includes all the elements of a really good short story. Thank you for the effort, UnderthinkThis. I look forward to more.

Keep 'em comin'.

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