All Comments on 'The Beast's Needs Ch. 01'

by ElleMonroe

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
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Love it... Please continue. This teaser has defo caught my interest

erin1955erin1955about 12 years ago
lovely

I really enjoyed it

GlosUKGlosUKabout 12 years ago
Great start

Small spelling error towards the end ....late/wait.

Hope you continue the story.

MizTMizTabout 12 years ago
Nice Start

Poor Alana, ready to give all to Dane only to be stopped at the very last minute and by who? And why does Dane have such a elaborate alarm system? Looking forward to chapter 2

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiabout 12 years ago
hot

this chapter is fucking hot. Thanks for giving me something to have wet dreams, and Dane oh my god, he's making me love werewolves even more. can't wait for the next chapter.

canndcanndabout 12 years ago

Very hot! Look forward to more...Man, I felt like I was the one waiting for him to slide home. Now that the damn alarm.... haha... I would like to know something of who they are to one another. I assume you'll work in their story and maybe some of their past into the next chapter. I look forward to more of the story.

BlackwidowBlackwidowabout 12 years ago
whew........

ummm more plz lol......

pleasurebound63pleasurebound63almost 12 years ago
mmmm

Ive always loved a good werewolf story...you chose a good name...Dane...very sexy and masculine...

LucyKing101LucyKing101almost 12 years ago
Please write More

Great introduction for a story, please please please don't leave us hanging and write more!

sherrylee1015sherrylee1015almost 12 years ago
Awesome

I really wanted to be her. Very good piece of work

defiantbutterflydefiantbutterflyalmost 12 years ago
damn tease...

This is the 2nd time I read this story, came looking for a new chapter but nothing yet... :( Please, continue this series... can't wait for more... literally on the edge of my seat.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Abandoned...

So sad, yet another story with promise, abandoned. Why bother to start, and to waste the time of readers? I don't get it.

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