by ElleMonroe
Small spelling error towards the end ....late/wait.
Hope you continue the story.
Poor Alana, ready to give all to Dane only to be stopped at the very last minute and by who? And why does Dane have such a elaborate alarm system? Looking forward to chapter 2
this chapter is fucking hot. Thanks for giving me something to have wet dreams, and Dane oh my god, he's making me love werewolves even more. can't wait for the next chapter.
Very hot! Look forward to more...Man, I felt like I was the one waiting for him to slide home. Now that the damn alarm.... haha... I would like to know something of who they are to one another. I assume you'll work in their story and maybe some of their past into the next chapter. I look forward to more of the story.
Ive always loved a good werewolf story...you chose a good name...Dane...very sexy and masculine...
Great introduction for a story, please please please don't leave us hanging and write more!
This is the 2nd time I read this story, came looking for a new chapter but nothing yet... :( Please, continue this series... can't wait for more... literally on the edge of my seat.....
So sad, yet another story with promise, abandoned. Why bother to start, and to waste the time of readers? I don't get it.