All Comments on 'The Beauty & The Beast'

Way way way to short of a very erotic tale. Need more please write more so that we can enjoy what happens next... wow could set my self on a good smolder to flame if the story would have lasted longer....

Really good.

I'd like it more if the grammar were better.

dangling modifier in 2nd paragraph: Her eyes can't clutch the bedspread.

8th paragraph: evasion --> invasion?