All Comments on 'The Beauty Contest'

by LeCoach

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Excellent

Great hot little story. It actually had a well thought out plot which was masterfully woven into truly believable real life. Nice writing Mate. Tell us more about small town America in the sixties.

ErotonautErotonautover 13 years ago
Terrific "first time" tale

Building in the elements of nervousness, accidental exposure and a sudden realisation of her own sexual power made this an above-average story. Full marks too for pacing, dialogue and description. This is the kind of erotica I visit this site to savour, but oh so rarely get the opportunity.

cbsummerscbsummersabout 10 years ago
Sweet story

Thanks for such a sweet, sexy story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Deflower Time

Nice little story of a nice young girl getting both her virgin pussy and ass done for the first time was nicely told. Thanx for the Read!

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I began writing erotic stories in my early teens. I feel this is my calling. I try to write stories that are at least somewhat believable. I love women and don't like to see them victimized or brutalized. Yes, there are some typos and other mistakes in my stories. I'm not...