All Comments on 'The Beauty of Their Forbidden Love'

by SensualBeauty

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luedonluedonover 8 years ago
Descriptive

I liked the descriptive language used in what was effectively a two-scene story. I'm not sure that the male character being married added anything much to the story. There was no exploration of the illicit nature of the relationship.

There was no feeling of guilt, no exploration of the impossibility or otherwise of continuing the relationship. Maybe in a subsequent story?

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chytownchytownover 8 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

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